论述观点（view, point, opinion）：many people insist that...很多人坚持认为...with the
development of science and technology, more and more people believe that······随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为·······
表达想到，认为，觉得不要老是用：remind、think，consider，suggest ,discover ,······
改成：it said that·····it occur to me that·····come up with······advent·····
想要提高英语作文水平除了需要掌握这些小窍门之外，更多的是需要不断累积不断练习写作，每次找到自己犯的错误也是一种进步，还是需要好好学习天天向上！